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40th: it doesn't work to refer to backstories that you don't really tell. The conflicts within the businessman's home didn't have any depth.
49th: One of the recurring problems of the story is that an awful lot has been assumed about what Jesus would do. There needs to be specific examples, and it can't just always about about the homeless or unfortunate person.
49th: One of the recurring problems of the story is that an awful lot has been assumed about what Jesus would do. There needs to be specific examples, and it can't just always about about the homeless or unfortunate person.