Interesting post. Will you suffer a critique?
There are a few things about the original text of Genesis that may help us see a more rational statement there than many have thought.
1:1 is a title like 2:4, 5:1 and many other places in Genesis. It is not action in the story yet.
Genesis 1 is written in a historical present tense. That is, the verbs are mostly phrased in present tense, in such a way that a bard or storyteller might recite the story as if it were happening now, for the benefit of engaging the listener.
1:1 is not part of the "action," as you say, since it is in perfect tense. But it is also not a title. It is backstory. It gives information that happens prior to the "action" of the story. "God had created the heavens and the earth."
The grammar of v2 actually goes: when God was creating the earth, it was already empty and void. Just note for now that there was material there already, in dissarray and emptiness. We don't know how long.
Yes. The first half of 1:2 is also part of the backstory, and is also in perfect tense.
'empty and void' (tohu wa-bohu) is an expression having to do with God's judgement. It is in Jer 4:11. The land of Israel was empty and void after the first captivity of Israel as a judgement.
'Empty' is a poor word choice for translation here, since, as you pointed out already, there is already "stuff" there. The KJV has "without form" which is on point, since the word indicates that there is chaotic stuff - "waters" in the verses that follow.
You have it a bit backwards, though. Jeremiah quotes Genesis; not vice versa. Because chronology. Since this is so... this choice of words doesn't indicate judgment in Genesis (though neither does it exclude it).
We just don't know what kind of thing offended God.
There are some clues in Job and the Psalms. Some of them have to do with a massive creature who was some sort of lizard in the sea.
The works you cited, have you read them fully? The "lizard in the sea" which you reference as being cited in Job and the Psalms is
leviathan.
A little comparative theology goes a long way to understanding leviathan. The same lizard-snake-monster turns up in 3 other creation stories that I know of, perhaps more:
1) In the Babylonian creation story (the Enuma Elish), the god Ea slays a serpentine monster named Tiamat, and creates the earth from her body. Tiamat is a primordial monster who embodies the attribute of chaos, and represents the oceans. In slaying her, Ea brings order to the chaos.
2) In the Hittite(/Hurrian) creation stories (the Illuyanka Encyclical & the Song of Ullikummi), the god Tarhunt(/Teshub) slays the great serpent Illuyanka, who also embodies the attribute chaos, and thereby gives respite to the gods and allows the earth to exist.
3) The Orphic tradition of Greek mythology records that while Zeus was but a child, and before Kronos his father ever reigned or was deposed, all creation was ruled by a great serpent Ophion, who was wed to the daughter of the Ocean, and how Ophion elevated the seas so that earth scarcely existed and water held dominion over the earth.
Clearly, there is a strong association between water, and storms, and seas, and serpents, and the principle of chaos.
The key to understanding all of these stories (and also Genesis 1) is to interpret them in terms of a conflict between chaos and order.
In all cases, God subdues chaos and brings order.
Understand Genesis then, in these terms. There is creation, and it is chaotic. The "action" in the story, then consists of God setting order to the creation, one piece, one day at a time.
Overall, it is a powerful argument for a protracted time of creation. God does not "poof" things into existence, ex nihilo, fully formed. Rather, he starts with a mass of unformed "waters" and shapes them methodically into the shape He desires.
Jarrod